The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. Those who work in nursing homes are very special people and often are the Rod and His staff to the residents there.
This was very well done. There have been thousands of stories written on Psalm 23 so I avoided the subject even though it was the first thought that popped into my mind.

I certainly would have written on the subject if I could have been as creative and original with it as you. Excellent job.
I love the creative take on Psalm 23--absolutely delightful.

I only have a slight problem with your premise--that the MC is looking for a cause for the lady's smile. If it only happened when someone whispered in her ear, that's a pretty obvious action and she wouldn't really have to look at other stimuli.

The wordplay at the end was very appealing, and I enjoyed this tender story bery much.
Clever and fresh approach to the topic. God bless~
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