The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
Yup, a spot on description of the aroma of Christ to a sinner who loves his sin.
11/01/05
Creative take on the topic and excellent, well-written dialogue. Great work!
11/02/05
Very nicely done.
11/03/05
Aaaah the smel of Christians in afternoon... a sweet thing.. Verry well worked, though mostly dialog, it still flowed nicely.. Another good job.. :-)
I liked this take on the verse and the topic! :-)
11/03/05
Pretty good work. Be careful not to lose your audience without dialogue beats or affirmation. Thanks for posting.
11/03/05
Interesting! Good dialogue. Wow, what if we really were known as Christians by our physical smell! Intriguing! Good work!
11/04/05
John is a very real character. I loved this line: "Lunch, alcohol and paperwork combined to lull him into a stupor." Good take on the topic.
:) Karen
11/05/05
A unique take on it - could see all the characters like in a tv show :)
A wonderful modern-day 'translation' of the verse. Works well. Well done.
11/05/05
Great take on the topic. It would be wonderful if people could identify us by our sweet aroma of Christ.
11/06/05
Great job! Not the first entry to take this approach the topic, but definitely one of the best! I could imagine this as a short skit. Very relaxed, worldly dialogue adds. Thanks for posting!
11/07/05
Debbie, it was an incredibly tight competition again this week, and I just wanted to let you know that you ranked 9th in the Level 3 placings, and 16th overall (out of 145). So well done - you are definitely doing extremely well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)