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Yup, a spot on description of the aroma of Christ to a sinner who loves his sin.
Creative take on the topic and excellent, well-written dialogue. Great work!
Very nicely done.
Aaaah the smel of Christians in afternoon... a sweet thing.. Verry well worked, though mostly dialog, it still flowed nicely.. Another good job.. :-)
I liked this take on the verse and the topic! :-)
Pretty good work. Be careful not to lose your audience without dialogue beats or affirmation. Thanks for posting.
Interesting! Good dialogue. Wow, what if we really were known as Christians by our physical smell! Intriguing! Good work!
John is a very real character. I loved this line: "Lunch, alcohol and paperwork combined to lull him into a stupor." Good take on the topic.
:) Karen
A unique take on it - could see all the characters like in a tv show :)
A wonderful modern-day 'translation' of the verse. Works well. Well done.
Great take on the topic. It would be wonderful if people could identify us by our sweet aroma of Christ.
Great job! Not the first entry to take this approach the topic, but definitely one of the best! I could imagine this as a short skit. Very relaxed, worldly dialogue adds. Thanks for posting!
Debbie, it was an incredibly tight competition again this week, and I just wanted to let you know that you ranked 9th in the Level 3 placings, and 16th overall (out of 145). So well done - you are definitely doing extremely well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)