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Amen - Jesus is our rock and our anchor. Faith is always inspiring. God Bless~
Oh this so reminds me of the words of the song “The Anchor Holds”!!! And it is so sad to see so many drifting along today without Jesus to anchor them, they grasp at things that will never hold. This was so well written, great message, I enjoyed!
This is a compelling metaphor, and you follow it through nicely. There seems to be a couple of verb tense changes that are distracting. The essay might be stronger if written in present tense throughout…just a thought. But you draw your metaphor with some beautiful word pictures and the lesson is profound.
I really needed to hear this right this second. The past 2 weeks have been some of the smoothest waters in a long while but last night I spotted storms on the horizon and I need to be reminded to never take my eyes off the Lord.