The Official Writing Challenge
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The story was sweet but I found myself distracted by the language/verbage you were trying to convey. It was a brave thing to try to pull off and very difficult. Liked the ending very much.
Good story. A little vernacular does go a long way, but you kept my interest all the way through. It’s good and it’s sweet, and it’s based on an actual incident, which makes it even more enjoyable. Thanks for writing this.
A well expressed and written piece! Enjoyed the read.
This was a beautiful story woven around a tragic bit of history. I found this interesting, entertaining and enjoyable. I felt the unfamiliar verbage added to the authentic feel you successfully conveyed.
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level 3!