The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an original take on the topic and very sad. Your descriptions were excellent and I got right inside the house with the MC. Well done.
Many of us have never seen the inside of a hoarder's house except on TV. I have unfortunately been inside someone's house after his spouse died, and you did an outstanding job capturing the details and the fear of letting go,of suffering another loss.
Excellent title for this well-written story. Perfect voice for your mc. I have a Polynesian brother-in-law: you nailed the accent and "pigeon" English. I like how you gave insight to your mc's dilemna (sp?) without putting her down for it. Well done. I hope this one sits well in the judging.
Yay! I'm glad to see the judges agreed this deserved recognition.
Congratulations on your win!
As a home health nurse I can relate to your mc, having seen many such scenarios & you depicted it all well.
Your choice of descriptions hit the mark. You took me there. You evoked compassion for this dear lady in her sad and painful life. Congratulations.