The Official Writing Challenge
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I found myself feeling Sarah's anxiety. Not sure I like where we're headed, but I enjoyed the read.
Interesting story and a good take on the topic. Frank was one tricky dude. I'd like to think there aren't people like that inthe world but... Good job.
11/14/10
Yes, the guy was underhanded and manipulative. I had no idea where the story was going, so I liked the unpredictableness. This was definitely creative.
11/16/10
I was a bit put off by both characters, which intrigued me. Your story kept me engaged.
11/16/10
I really enjoy this screenplay format, really sets the scene well.

I liked the character interaction and I loved the irony of the cell phone ringtone at the end.