The Official Writing Challenge
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I found myself feeling Sarah's anxiety. Not sure I like where we're headed, but I enjoyed the read.
Interesting story and a good take on the topic. Frank was one tricky dude. I'd like to think there aren't people like that inthe world but... Good job.
Yes, the guy was underhanded and manipulative. I had no idea where the story was going, so I liked the unpredictableness. This was definitely creative.
I was a bit put off by both characters, which intrigued me. Your story kept me engaged.
I really enjoy this screenplay format, really sets the scene well.

I liked the character interaction and I loved the irony of the cell phone ringtone at the end.