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This is a touching but sad story. It did show why it's so important to reach out to that stranger next to you when you feel God tugging at your heart. We never know what a difference we might make in someone's life.
Great story! Janice reminded me a little of my grandmother, always loving and active. Good job!
Enjoyed reading your story and how two strangers' hearts were able to connect. And for the hope offered by the end of your story.
I loved everything about your story. Your writing is great and the story really touched me in many ways. God Bess!
Love your story. It's beautifully written and touched my heart. God is so gracious, and always right on time. Thanks for sharing this.
Touching story. May we always treat the boy on the street with the respect we would give our own family, and be willing to reach out to strangers at the computer next to us.
Your story presents beautifully the aroma of Christ to others. I loved it. That is what I desire to be.
This was a wonderful piece, very meaningful. God Bless you, Ruth