The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for reminding us of the many things that God shows us. Good job!
This is a beautiful poem and it speaks the truth. I noticed a tiny typo in the penultimate stanza, you used bathe when either the am should not be there (which would ruin the meter) or it should be bathed. But the sentiment and your passion for the Lord is what really shines through.
I could almost picture the author writing this as I felt the heart pour forth such a deserving bounty of gratitude and adoration for our God. Amen!
Lovely; thank you for letting us see through your eyes the wonder and majesty of our great God.
I enjoyed the message in your poem.
I enjoyed the message in your poem.
Thanks for making your awareness of the beauty of God's creation so clear.
Ilove the simplicity and the easy read to this poem. Beautifully expressed insight.
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