The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your very unique take on this. Great job. It speaks volumes.
I really like this! Such a true, important message...and I love the way you chose to present it. Bees, the sting of anger--how clever! I would have never come up with it.
Very clever ,and certainly full of truth! Creative and well done.
I really enjoyed this! You certainly should be applauded for thinking "out of the box." How very creative and a great read! It took me awhile to figure out the name Y.J. I'm assuming it is short for "yellow jacket?" Great work!
Cute and clever! How'd you ever decide to plan a story around a bee? The cleverness frightens me! :)
Great job - Jo
I just want to finally leave a comment on your entry and let you know how much I loved it. You already know that I have my eye on it for the FaithWriters' Magazine. It's such a good message, with such a sting in the tail. Well done lovely lady. Love Deb
Both fun and convicting...a good match!