The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, how I love word play, puns & homophones! This was delightful & a cute romance to boot. Good job!

Minor punctuation detail: “I think I can explain mom, but first I need to speak to Rowdy.” I don't think anyone can really explain mom (heehee) but I think you meant to have it as "I think I can explain, Mom, but first...". A couple of possessive apostrophes missing here & there also but other than that, wonderful.
The word "great" comes to mind...great use of the theme, great story line, great characters, great dialogue, great ending. Well done!
I loved this story; very clever and well written. Kudos to you.
Very enjoyable tale. I could see it all. Good job.
LOVE IT! Great Story!
This was nice to read. The background was developed well and I like the flash forward at the end. I hope Tess and Rowdy live happily ever after.
Really loved this. Beautifully, humorously and sensitively written. Well done. Margaret