The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 663 times
Member Comments
The room by room descriptions were very nice and an effective way to write. I would have enjoyed having more description in the beginning of the article about what I am seeing and why.There were some grammar problems that I suspect are due to language differences. Overall this is a good piece of writing and a nice vantage point.
A good descriptive piece. I really enjoyed the tour of the house and the memories.