The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Wow! Chills ran up and down my spine. Very well-written and take on the topic.
08/15/05
Well done on a thoughtful piece of writing.
08/15/05
I agree...eerie! Very creative piece of writing. Great writing.
08/15/05
Vantastic!
Wow - what an original approach and certainly something to think about. Almost like a "scared straight" essay. Good writing and an even better message.
This was fun to read with a powerful message too. A rarity. Thanks!
This is AWESOME, oozing with creativity all the way through. Good lead, good development, good closure. Couldn't be better! It was a real treat to read this!! :-)
08/20/05
Excellent story, but I don't think the demons should be people who died. The thought was interesting as to why they were doing the "work", but it's not scriptural.
08/20/05
Okay I really loved this and you did it so well. I tried a similar concept this week.
This abyssmal van is a good vehicle for some meaningful social commentary. Kind of like a hybrid of C. S. Lewis' 'Great Divorce' and 'Screw Tape Letters'. Nice work!