The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
How sweet...the Lord did not say "blessed are the peacemakers" for nothing. I especially liked the verse you included from Proverbs.
I enjoyed this "slice of life" story, and the wonderful message it conveys. Excellent writing!
09/14/09
I can't resist a child's sweet apology, either. Nice story!
Sweet story of grace between mother and child. Nicely done.
09/16/09
I loved the image you conjured with your first sentence. Great job.
09/16/09
Sweet story. Lesson to child...Mom's like to kiss and make up. Lesson to mom...no more bananas in school lunches. eww gross.
09/16/09
Lovely story! Great job! Big time kudos!
09/16/09
I wish bananas in backpacks was the worst battles we had to wage as parents. I would trade the teenage drama for bananas in packpacks any day. I'm glad everyone left the battle front unharmed. We parents DO need to pick our battles carefully. Nice job.
09/17/09
A charmimg little story, with a charming little guy. Well done!