The Official Writing Challenge
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Sorry guys, this was supposed to be last weeks entry, I'm not sure how I managed to send the wrong one, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. I think my brain was on a retreat.
Good writing all the same! It seemed to not really end, will this be a series?
You really drew me into the scene! Well done, and what an unexpected twist at the end....!
Brad, it never occurred to me until I read your comment that this was off topic! I just really enjoyed the read.
Awesome story. Expand it. Thanks.
Very well written.
Thanks - enjoyed reading it anyway.
This would have been a strong contender last week. It might even do well THIS week! Very good writing. Nice line: "“I haven’t always known God. These marks may show where I’ve been, but they have no bearing on where I am going.”."

Very very good.
A very good story -but it's a week late ;) Maybe a FW computer glitch??? I really liked the ending!