The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
The Serenity Prayer and the verse you quote ("being content in whatever state you're in") are perfect for this topic. Sandy's story is one that happens often in our present day world. The lesson she learns/displays is very good. You've written this story very well.
You have packed so much in to this story! First there is the "milk" of the divorce, then the "milk" of believing she would be the odd one out.
You show how reaching out to others gets our minds off ourselves.
And then, the wonderful twist! I hope you will share in the future about their wedding, and/or work on the mission field.
02/16/08
Lots of twists and turns to this story! Great reading!
Laury
02/17/08
I want the rest of the story. Do they go out or not?

Good story with two "spilled milk" issues.
02/18/08
****Excellent**** you get the star! I truly enjoyed this piece. On point with the topic and much more. Anyone who is in the doldrums before reading this I am sure will be lifted. Good Job!!