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08/03/07
Bravo. nuf said.
08/03/07
The topic was wrenched from the story by a little child. She took away the "sad" from the story and brought "hope" - a nice story; thanks for sharing.
08/04/07
You depicted the emotions and situation masterfully. Well crafted, loved it.
08/04/07
Wow. Very emotional and poignant. I like the tiny ray of hope at the end.
08/05/07
Awwwwwwww! Marvelous story!
So sweet, and what a perfect ending. Well done.
I really liked the way you told this "sad" story. You capably laid out what depression is and how it affects others.
08/07/07
Excellent portrayal, Marty - love the voice, the perspective, and sweet little Julia. So moving.
Wow, Oh my! What a well written poignant piece. It left me wanting more. I hope that you will post a follow up article...