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05/13/07
I love this! The parallels here: Adam/Christ and Serpent/Satan are intriguing and well-thought out. I'd love to see this expanded and performed.
05/14/07
YES! YES! Expand this! Powerful depiction!
05/14/07
This is great. I could feel the slithering of satan around me as I read this. What a great analogy. I agree -- expand this.
I like this one very much. The imagery you used is powerful and moving. Great job!
05/14/07
Wow - interesting look into a familiar story. I really liked the paralells as well, also a different take on why Adam ate the fruit. Reminds me of parts of John Milton's Paradise Lost.
Caught in the web from the first sentence. Wanting all of it - from scene one onward. Excellant! Thanks
05/14/07
Tremendous! I'm so glad I got to read this !!! Very, very well done. Kudos!
05/15/07
Wow - SO powerful and insightful. I agree - more, more, more!
Creativity alert! This is amazing! I really like the parallels here, especially Adam. The last part where he took the bite. I think you outdid yourself on this. It's brilliant and on my favorites! ^_^
05/16/07
Most awesome read! I want to see it performed!
05/16/07
This was wonderful. You caught my attention early on and I loved it. Let me know when the next scene is written! God blessed your writing.