The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
Great POV, descriptions, set up of the situation and possible consequences. The description of the TP coming down the aisle was one I could see. The ending was a great tie, making your title perfect. I liked it very much!
What a delightful anecdote! I'm still laughing. I love your conclusion and title tie-in.
This is really great and told very well. I liked the ending. Wonderful memory.
As I was judging, I found this of course very humorous, but also quite touching. The ending was perfect! Blessings, Elizabeth