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A heart-wrenching story, but beautiful description. I could feel her pain.
My mother lost her mom at age 7 and then several siblings by her teen years. She is just now starting to express verbally the grief those years meant to her, and your words here stir the very same expressions. Haunting, sad, but very well crafted. I can see the scene vividly. Excellent.
The "final" anything is sad, the final word, final kiss, final music. So bittersweet and yet written so beautifully. Although terribly sad it is a creative challenge on the topic of music. Well done.
What a sad story. Well written, but very sad.
This is a sad story, but does point out the power of music and its ability to carry us through those difficult times. Good job showing this.
Soul-stirring. It makes you remember-this piece. The title was appropriate and you did a great job with the music theme and weaving in a story to tug at someone's heart. ^_^
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