The Official Writing Challenge
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Difficult to read with no paragraphing and spacing...but thanks for sharing this input with FW.
Nice descriptions and a great story with a good message. I agree , you need to seperate papragraphs for easier reading. Maybbe your format came out wrong when submitting?
Very interesting story with excellent descriptions! Why was she resisting looking at the painting, though, if it took her back to such a wonderful time in her life? Was the contrast between her life now and her life then too great? I'd like to know more! :) Anyway, I'm glad her husband bought her the painting! He must be a very sensitive man! Thanks for sharing this!