The Official Writing Challenge
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Priceless! What a great twist on the topic of "shrewdness." Well constructed, expertly written. This is one of my favorites so far.
Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
Nice twist to your story. I give your character credit for being so bold and sharing so directly. Nicely told. :)
Excellent! Should be published.
Wow! This is just GREAT.
The story was well written but I guess it didn't feel "real" to me. I guess because I've never met anyone who would put their job on the line to do it this way. But it was well written and the character paced nicely.
I believe this wonderful piece will inspire more Christians to share their faith. "He who lays down his life for My sake shall find it." I love your story!
Congratulations Bob - 5th place in the Editors' Choice Awards and 3rd place in the Level 3 Champion Challenge. You've only been at FaithWriters a relatively short time, but you're really making your mark. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)