The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Beautiful story! With the faith of a child, we are to enter the Kingdom of Heaven.
03/15/05
An excellent story. It had a slightly distant feel to it, as though I were watching a movie, and I think that this made it all the more powerful. I could almost hear a soft, emotioanl music accompaniment in the background! Keep on writing, please. You've got talent.
03/15/05
It's a wonderful thing when we share the Lord with others. Your story did it in a very sweet, touching way. :)
03/16/05
A winner in my book! The message is powerful and beautifully presented. The story is exactly on topic. Good job! ~LG~
Beautifully and tenderly written.
03/21/05
I loved this Brenda, many times it is the simpler minds that can receive the truth of Christ in all its fulness.