The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some excellent points. I was a bit confused at the beginning because you seem to contradict yourself on lock vs locks. I'm not sure you needed that opening. It did distract me a bit. I think it would pull me in more if you started with second sentence of second paragraph. You did a great job of writing on topic for sure. You also have a strong message and made me stop and think.
04/30/26
I like how you transitioned from the physical locks to the spiritual locks and the security we have in Jesus our "Locksmith."