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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Protector (12/05/24)
When a baby cries, his or her mother would comfort the infant from harm. People who have faith in God often pray that their loved ones would heal from sickness or abuse in the family. Children who get bullied at school need protection from their perpetrators.

When wars happens in different parts of world such as Ukraine, people were living in shelters when they lost their homes. Innocent people such as women and children were targeted the most. It was so sad that some of them as well as others were killed. Some people thought,
"Where was God when this was going on?" None of would have any answers. We have to believe that God had a purpose for those people for even those who did not survive.

In our daily lives with even myself, we always need God to look over us. For example if somebody tried to harm me as I am working, I would ask for a security guard. Sometimes God puts people in ours lives to help us.

Most of all we need to reinforce protection over our children in schools from abuse from other students or teacher, patients in hospitals who get abused by staff or visitors, and people who the streets.
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Barbara Culler 
12/17/24
You speak the truth.

This would be a more interesting read if you showed little vignettes of each point of your paragraphs. For example, paint us a word picture of how Mama protects her little one.

End with showing us an example of how God protects us.

Keep up the good work, you have what it takes to be a good writer!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
12/19/24
You make some great points. I think you really made your message clear. I'd urge you to ask someone to read your piece to you or read it aloud before submitting. It'll help you find mistakes and sentences that might need some smoothing out. You did a great job of writing on topic in a way so many can relate to.