The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun story, it kept my attention all the way to the end. The use of 'reed' as your focus was clear.
You have a great foundation here. I really liked the characters and the suspense was great. I think the word limit may have hurt you a bit. I wasn't exactly sure what the boys were up to, although I got the general idea. It's a great idea for a kids' story though and with a good editor, I can see this being a thrilling story. Good job.
03/05/23
This was a fun read!