The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story. Your crafting of the whole thing is amazing - I wish I could dream up such a concept.
I wonder if there is enough focus on the Challenge topic 'Whisper' though. Maybe, as the guests were whipsering. I hope the judges think so as it is a delightful and surprising story.
Kudos.
You did a wonderful job of setting the scene in a fresh and interesting way. I liked how you built the suspense. You have a clear message too.