The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/21
God is awesome and amazing.
Thank You.
11/27/21
Wow!

Thank you.

A tiny read ink. It makes an easier read with one or two more paragraphs.
11/30/21
Amen!
Thanks for sharing your entry with us.
The LORD's love and mercy, doesn't get any better than that.
Blessings~
That’s a great story. I would have lingered longer, relived the wonderous miracle had... say a few things; the Pastor had a name.? A bit of dialogue to make it 3D?
This is a lovely devotion with a clear message and is definitely on topic. Be careful about POV shifts. Instead perhaps tell the story from your POV instead of the minister's. Also make sure you properly credit songs, poems, and others' words with quotation marks, title, and name. You can do this in an author's note. You have a lot of passion in your words and I look forward to reading more of your work.