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This is a powerful piece. I had a baby at 18 and can relate to many of the pieces of the story. You have a nice flow, a great message, and you did a good job of writing on topic.
05/07/21
What a wonderful testimony and right on topic. It is good for young people to read this article to see that it is Jesus they need in their life to give them the blessings necessary for a rich life. The experiences you've had will certainly be of use to you in the rearing of your two children. Keep on writing; this is a beautiful message for your readers.
Thank you Shann and Phyllis for your encouraging comments.
05/08/21
This is very moving and it kept my interest throughout. It brings forth an excellent and important message.
05/10/21
Thank you for sharing what was difficult. I am happy you have found peace and happiness.