The Official Writing Challenge
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Good, creative idea. Keep it up 👍
04/14/21
Interesting story. Certainly pray that it does not come true.
You do a nice job of building suspense. Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
04/15/21
I like this story. And the surprise. Be mindful of your grammar and verb tenses. Write more active verbs and leave off passive. Build emotion by showing the reader, not simply telling. Finding the Bible is a superb climax.