The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet take on the topic. I think you did a great job of pacing it. It matched that lazy feeling that a Monday morning in the country brings. My only main suggestion would be to vary your words some. There were a few repeats (coffee, garden, Monday) for such a short piece. I liked your take on the topic and think you managed to tackle it in an out-of-the-box way.