The Official Writing Challenge
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This is some powerful good storytellin'. Pretty convincing dialogue to boot. Very well done - keep on writing. This should place well.
02/17/16
Excellent!

Blessings~
02/18/16
It reminded me the story of Johnny Appleseed. Nothing better than the bite of a good apple.
02/18/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
I really liked this story. I never expected it to be the story of the Golden Delicious, and the dialogue of the man and boy were realistic. Very well done and congrats!

God bless!
02/18/16
Congratulations, Ruth, on your highly commendable placing in the Intermediate Category. Your MCs are delightful.