The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/16
I LOVE this poem. Esp. the two lines finishing each verse concerning satan. I enjoyed this take on "delicious" - it being an acknowledgement that sin's enticements are to things irresistible which promise such pleasure.
Thanks!
02/17/16
Excellent work!

Blessings~
Your poem is well written, creatively showing your thoughts.
02/17/16
I thought this poem was well scripted. Even though this was a popular theme this week, I thought your writing was infused with creativity.
02/18/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
02/18/16
Congratulations, JE, on your 2nd place in the Intermediate Category. Your poem really invoked great imagery.
02/18/16
Brilliant! I hope you're pleased with this piece bc it is fantastic! See you in level 3 soon:)

Ps- the last stanza made it what it was- great!
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 21 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
02/20/16
Again, JE, your writing is superb. Through your words, I feel. Thank you.
Your winning place is well-deserved.
I'm glad to see you have moved up to Intermediate Level. With writing like this, you will soon be moving further.