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TITLE: THE Great American grilling experience | Previous Challenge Entry
By Douglas Eckert
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Are you gonna put a fork in US soon Lord?
Are we almost done?
YOUR made in the USA
"In God we trust"
Liberty loving grill...
it used to be filled up
with tastyT-bones AND
fillet mignon!
The joyful justice juices
used to overflow and spill into the flames
and onto the grease pan
of the griddle...
Filling up the world's air
with a sweet, Freedom enticing, HEAVEN sent redolence
making the mouths of others fill up with a hungry, God affirming spittle.
But when WE took over
YOUR grill Lord,
and started
"man handling"
YOUR grill's great tongs...
THAT'S when our great grilling experience Lord
went oh! so desperately wrong!
Those precious steaks...
we let them fall into the flames and become worthless, and shamelessly wastefully charred.
And a sickening,
putrid, freedom burning
foul smell
now eminates
across the whole world's backyard
Maybe a few more trips Lord?
around YOUR cooking sun,
then all US "weenies and hotdogs" that are left on the grill wlll be ready Lord?
ready for YOUR waiting "just desserts delicious BUN "!
Oh! yummmmmmm!!
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