The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/15
Well written and good message.
God bless~
03/08/15
God uses the weakness of human beings to show His wonderful works. By faith we can move past our errors to a place where we can by our example lead others to Christ. Thanks for the Biblical quotes.
03/09/15
Love this!
03/10/15
You are a gifted devotional writer. I love everything about this piece. It is well written, concise, does not ramble aimlessly, makes a clear point and ends in a logical and compelling fashion. You should definitely submit this as a devotional to Faithwriters to be used as one of the "Great Multitude" devo's that appear daily on the home page. I hope you do well in the Challenge.
03/10/15
P.S. If you do decide to submit it as a FaithWriter Devo - keep it under 300 words, including a brief prayer at the end. The title and short bio if desired at the end should also be kept in the word count (Total words, 300 or less).
This is a nice devotion. I like the Bible verses and the message. The only thing I might suggest would be to show an example in your life when God helped you through a situation or where you felt like one of the characters in the Bible you mentioned. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivering your message without coming off as preachy. Keep writing and do consider submitting to the FW devos.

You may want to check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards. She gives great advice and responds to everyone who participates. It's one of the best tools on the Internet.