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Topic: Smell (the sense of smell) (07/29/10)
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TITLE: Fragrance of Love! | Previous Challenge Entry
By Cindy Tuttle
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
of love surrounds me
as I lift my voice in prayer
The sweet perfume of
Your sacred presence
fills my heart with peace
I bathe in the
waters of rebirth
and listen as you say
Smell the roses
and breathe in my
scent of delight
Feel the essence
of my light
as it warms your soul
My fragrance of love
will calm the inner
storm and turmoil
Can you smell
My cologne of holiness
as I draw near?
Let it consume
you and take
you to your deepest self
That’s right, follow
Me even deeper
Now we are resting in your soul
Feel the passion of
My scared light
warm your soul
Smell the bouquet
of eternal love
and sing with the angels
Now you are home
Now you are
with your creator
There is no greater love
No greater serenity
Your soul is at peace
Your heart gently
beats with mine
and the two beat as one
Rest a little while longer
then spread the fragrance
of love you have received to the world
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Well-written, good grammar & spelling except for one word, (scared--which should be sacred). Your use of verbs was critical here for the total effect. Good writing. :)