The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/06
What I like- you have given truths with scriptures to back up. Nice information.

What I might change - You should break up your paragraphs for easier reading. Try separating your ending for impact. I think you might want to work on a better one as the last line is a continuation of the paragraph.
A little intro with a story or blurb also might create more interest and be an example of the teaching you are doing. As a reader - I want to be given examples with the scripture. Thanks for writing this!:)
11/04/06
good info, need to space your paragraphs
I'm with Terri here. I would like to add perhaps typing your piece and using spell check in Word or something like it. Remember, spell check only tells you if a word is spelled wrong, not if it's the wrong word to use. You'll also be able to catch where you've missed punctuation. A good book to use to help you with knowing which words to use would be, 'Words you thought you knew by Jenna Glatzer'

May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write to glorify HIM!