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This poem is adorable. It reminded of Dr. Seuss. very clever and fun.
I enjoyed this immensely. I heard about this incident also, and I felt just a little bad smiling through your poem at the tragic event. Good flow and fun rhyming words. Nice job.
Very funny. We tear up the humans too (with words) when we see that cake pass us by.
I loved your sing-song poem! This would be a great commercial pitch (except for the killing part, of course). Imagine the ad for "Betty Crocker" cake mix. I can see the crumbs flying now!!!
Very cute! I great lesson woven in a seriously, humorus verse. - Nancy
A delightful read and maybe a good reminder to know there are true dangers about not thinking of others...
Brilliant! Based on an earlier comment, this was true? You have a tremendous ability with words - keep using your gift, won't you!
An important lesson here told in humorous verse with a tragic ending. You have a wonderful gift of using poetry to tell your story and make your point.