The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story! I'd like to hear more of what happened!
You did a great job introducing this character Heidi - helping me to see her as a real person. You piqued my interest and I want to know what happens next! Thanks for posting!
Wonderful job, I liked how it turned out.
This certainly captured the theme of willingness. We have to be willing to give people a chance, to talk and listen. It's one of those pieces that could be made up or real; it doesn't matter as the characters seemed real enough to me and made me want to see the next chapter. I don't know how the job went for the character but as a reporter, he did what came natural.
Very interesting story. I'd love to read more, too. Congratulations!