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05/12/06
Nice sermonette, I wanted to rearrange some of your paragraphs, but this works okay.
05/13/06
You seem to be prophetic, and with that, I think you could do a great job of turning this piece into a beautiful poetic piece of written art. Certain parts of it stand out that need to be captured into this picture - the homeless man, the blue cape among others.
This capsulizes hope well. Good job.
05/15/06
'...hope fans the flames of our faith ...' Right on! :)

You hit a whole spectrum of truths and weaved them together into that one word - Hope. Great job!

A great devotional to start my day - thanks for that. It's so easy to lose hope.



This is a nice, well worded devotional.
05/16/06
One of the best devotionals I've read on FWs this week. Good use of anecdotal experience and imagination. Expressed clearly without preaching.
07/26/06
Sharon, this is a brilliant, and mulifaceted picture of hope. It should have been awarded the 1st EC award!!