The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the simplicity and honesty of the prayer. The second stanza did not seem to fit with the rest of the poem. It was the use of the word "Waitress". Were you talking about your occupation there, or was it the idea of serving God through your writing? OK I am confused! I skimmed through the scripture verses.
I actually got the "waitress" part. Overall good, it seemed to lacked a bit of zing though. Keep writing.