The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of eternally significant thought packed into your poem.
I've written a few poems (I maybe straining the friendship to use the literary term "poem"' in reference to my entries, but it was great fun and each time I thought about the topic I was caught up in a rhyme scheme - usually the ABAB.
Wonderful.
Poetry is my weakest genre but I enjoyed your piece and could feel the passion in each word. Good Job.