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This would make an excellent Bible study. You do a great job of relating the verses to life today. Make sure when you quote Bible verses that you put them in quotation marks so they can be distinguished from your words. You have a clear message and a nice take on the topic.
05/28/21
This entry not only read well, but it caused me to think about my listening to God more. Sometimes we think we know it all, but we need this kind of reminder at times to wake us up to the fact that if we just listened to God, things just might work out better. I noticed only one thing I would point out and that is in the paragraph that begins "But to be successful..." you forgot the word "to" after according. I enjoyed this entry very much.
05/29/21
In agreement with the 2 previous comments, as far as the grammar and forgotten word. By the way that was a good catch, by Laura, I didn't notice it.

I really enjoyed the way you encouraged the reader (me) to seek God first and your numerous examples from the Word of Truth.

Well done.

05/31/21
Beautifully written, and beautiful message,
Blessings~