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Sounds like you've given a lot of yourself over the years.
This sounds like the way church used to be when I was much younger! You serve well.
Thank you for all the "generous" service you give to your church and community. It might help to break your article into a few more small paragraphs; it may also be easier to read and group different ideas together. Try finding an editing partner...I have one, and she blesses me continually, and we have become good friends.
This really shows how you've given a lot over the years.

I think it would have been better to choose one of these things and told a story about how it ended up blessing you and others. For example, maybe singing in the choir. Add some dialogue. Give us one whole story, rather than just a list of things you've done.

Great job being on topic.