The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way you ended the prose with Jesus!
Great job touching on the various storms in this poem
Each line of your poem parades some of life's storms. And these can be physical and mental.

Words you found to rhyme
in such a short time.

Neat and clean also your lines.

When you enjoy and do well in one form of writing, practice and write even more.