The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful use of the topic in this well written and enjoyable entry.

I liked your attention to length of line and your rhymes. Each verse seemed complete in itself so the story was told quickly. It was all held together by the one word "green".

OH, I was one of those young boys in the summer who collected their shells and put them in small stick pens and called them our cows.

I liked your quick work.
A fun read. On topic. Great job. Look forward to more of your poems.
When I write poetry, it doesn't come out this way. Great job. I enjoyed this so much. Thanks for sharing.

Looking forward to seeing more of your poems.

Happy writing, and God bless - Trudy