The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely read that touched my heart!

It would be interesting to know if this was a true life story.

I enjoyed the learning that was presented - we should be ashamed that we forget all these simple things that we should be thankful for.

Well written.
I want to go play in the park. It sounds wonderful, especially to a child who has never seen such a place. I kept wondering what age this person is. If a small child she seems to use a vocabulary older than herself. I love the visionary effect of your writing. I felt I was walking along through the beauty with the child.
You just gave me a little taste of heaven. And don't you every be concerned about being different. You have a beautiful heart that sees God's magnificent creation. You have a gift.Continue to write beautiful expressions from your heart like this example. God bless.
Beautifully written. I, too, would like to know if this is a true story.

You paint word pictures, which is a difficult thing for me to do. I can actually see the "Park".

Keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of you stories.

God bless - Trudy