The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/16
An interesting poem. To stretch yourself as a writer, look for alternative words for zenith. Overusing it makes the word lose its power.
04/28/16
Beautiful message!

Blessings~
05/05/16
Congratulations, Dorothy, on placing highly commendable in the Intermediate Category.

Your poem had a good message. Try using a thesaurus for examples of other words for achieve and zenith.