The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/15
It took me awhile to get the gist of your story. Maybe I'm just slowl maybe you could have made it clearer. I see the traveler as death, but if that's true than the destination would also be death? Great lesson but needs some clarification.
07/17/15
Cancer is the ultimate ugly tourist. This is ingenious! Sad and scary, but still, ingenious. Out of the box in a very good way.
07/17/15
Tracy cleared it up for me. Very creative.
07/17/15
Whoa! Powerful! Intense! Ingenious! Brilliant!

I think this is beyond creative. Wow!

I pray this goes over well with whomever judges this week!

Fabulous and will remember this for a long time.

God bless~
Wow this is a brilliant idea. I think it's fresh and powerful. The only real complaint is I'd have loved to see even more, perhaps some actual dialog and thoughts, some scheming and body language. You have so much potential in this piece. It's powerful and something we can't avoid, but with Christ by our side, death turns from a ugly trip to the magnificent rest stop. I do think your original idea was on topic. I think this ranks up as one of my favorites thus far this week. Kudos on a good story.