The Official Writing Challenge
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Truly a visual feast, with a heart warming testimony of God's magnificence. Well done.
08/04/13
Beautiful descriptions that brought the scene to life in my room. I felt a burst of cold air and it's 95 today in Alabama.

Well written. Thanks for sharing.
08/05/13
This was so well written, it read like a poetic introspect at the beginning of an epic novel. Loved it.

Great job. God bless~
This is a lovely story. I can feel the emotions pour off the page. You did a nice job of pulling me right into the story. Nice job.
08/08/13
Congratulations! God bless~