The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, the tender touch of the Master's hand. Our sinful mistakes can't be too great for His forgiving power. Well demonstrated in this excellent story.
Aw, I love your humorous-to-serious approach here. I was laughing one moment, down the next. Nice little surprise ending you finished it off with.
I could see this as an actual novella...It was that good. Nice job, tense moments and light hearted ones made for a interesting and sweet story.

Thanks. God Bless~
This is a sweet story. One thing I've learned this week is that life in general is one huge experiment.
That sure left my head spinning. Good Job!
Excellent read. Life is an experiment. One of learning and growing in the Lord. Thank you and God bless.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level two!